If you haven’t yet read Elaine Magliero’s book “Things to Do”, I strongly encourage you to do so. I owe a big shout out to Jama Rattigan for her delightful interview with Elaine Magliero, which inspired me to pick up this enchanting book. I shared some of the poems with my class, and they were eager to try out this form. So was I! It’s a wonderful entryway into persona or mask poem writing. Ever since reading it, I’ve found myself thinking differently. What might I do if I was…moss? a cat? a house? Thinking this way, I looked at my favorite birch tree in a new light. It now seemed like the perfect subject for a Things to Do poem.
Things to do if you’re a birch tree
Greet the rising sun
Sparkle with dew
Wave au revoir to the morning star
as each day starts anew
Shelter singing birds
Dangle a swing
Spread your skirt of dappled shade
Jewel your core with rings
Stretch your pale limbs wide
and reach up high
Create a crackled quilt of color
in azure summer skies
Sway with the breezes
Rustle your leaves
Cradle the full moon in your branches
on a soft and sultry eve
Molly Hogan (c) 2017
To enjoy more poetry, make sure to visit this week’s Poetry Friday Roundup at Buffy Silverman’s blog, Buffy’s Blog.
I haven’t seen this book yet, but your poem is a wonderful addition. So much I love: wave au revoir, jewel your core with rings, crackled quilt… many gems in this poem.
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Thanks, Margaret. It’s a fun form to play around with!
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Masterful poetry. What a gift for 4th graders to have a poet/teacher combo.
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Thanks, Dan. It’s been a lot of fun writing poetry with older students.
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Well done, I like the images you present and your rhyming is delightful. Thank you.
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Thank you so much! I seldom attempt rhyming poems (or near rhyming), so I really appreciate the positive feedback!
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Molly, this is gorgeous! Jewel your core with rings. Love!
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Thanks, Irene!
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We had to say goodbye to our weeping birch last fall. So many memories. Thanks for this beautiful poem!
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Thanks! I’d love to see your birch tree memories captured in a poem.
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Wonderful imagination, Molly. You’ve given this tree a new being! Like Irene, I love “Jewel your core with rings” too. Elaine’s book is terrific, I agree!
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Elaine’s book has inspired a lot of students in my classroom, too! It’s simply wonderful.
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I haven’t had a chance to read this book yet, but I am loving all the poetry it is inspiring. Your poem is lovely–makes me want to go visit a birch tree.
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You’re welcome to visit my birch tree anytime, Kay. It’s delightful and hosts a wide variety of birds.
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Lovely poem, Molly–I especially liked your magical final stanza. Things To Do is on my Books To Read list!
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Thanks, Buffy! I’m sure you’ll love Elaine’s book!
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Sounds like quite a nice life, being a birch tree! 🙂
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That birch tree certainly enhances my life. 🙂
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I love Elaine’s book. What a treat to share it with students. I like your poem, and I’m not alone in especially liking “Spread your skirt of dappled shade/ Jewel your core with rings”. Sensational.
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Love this, and I adore birch trees! My instructional aide has Vitiligo and she says birches are her tree soul mates because of the coloration change. I can’t wait to share this with her!
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Molly, this is imaginative and such a picturesque statement from the birch tree. Are you interested in sending me an image poem for the spring gallery?
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I’d love to do that, Carol! Thanks for asking!
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Love your poem, Molly — such great images and word choices. Add me to those praising the second stanza especially — truly beautiful. Glad you like Elaine’s book — it is a fabulous mentor text. 🙂
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Wonderful, Molly! I had to read it several times. I love trees. From my home I can observe at least a dozen different kind. And thanks for sharing Elaine’s book; I must add it to my mentor list.
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This is wonderful, Molly. I’m also in love with ‘Jewel your core with rings’. Gorgeous!
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Sounds like that birch tree enjoys a beautiful and fulfilling life, Molly! You use many wonderful word choices and images, but yes, the ring line takes the cake.
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Wonderful verbs, Molly! “Cradle” is a favorite, and I also love “Jewel your core with rings.”
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Thanks, Tabatha. This form is great for focusing on verbs!
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Gorgeous lines here: Spread your skirt of dappled shade/ Jewel your core with rings
My friend, who is very fond of birch trees, taught me that groves are one living organism — not separate trees at all. Whoa!
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