PF: January

This month our Inklings challenge came from Catherine Flynn. She invited us to write a poem beginning with either “This is January” or “January.” My thoughts immediately turned to John Updike’s poem “January” and it’s first stanza, which eloquently sums up what our days are like during a Maine winter:

The days are short,
The sun a spark,
Hung thin between
The dark and dark.

Inspired by this poem, I first tried writing some rhyming verses, but that fizzled out pretty quickly. Then, when I woke early on New Year’s Day, it was snowing. It was unexpected and oh, so lovely.

January

begins with the slow hush
of snowfall
dark skies brighten with
lacy flakes tracing
their earthbound migration

A peaceful gathering

©Molly Hogan

I’m hoping for many tranquil, peaceful moments for us all during this coming year.

Catherine is hosting the Poetry Friday Roundup this week at her blog, Reading to the Core, and you can read her response to the prompt there. If you want to see what the other Inklings did with this challenge, click on the links below.

Mary Lee @ A(nother) Year of Reading
Linda @A Word Edgewise
Margaret @Reflections on the Teche
Heidi @my juicy little universe

3 thoughts on “PF: January

  1. amyilene's avatar amyilene says:

    Somehow you were able to capture the quiet of new snow…and I love that final line!

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  2. margaretsmn's avatar margaretsmn says:

    Snow on New Year’s Day captured in a soft poem! Thanks for sharing. We have warmth again, our typical winter and roller coaster temps. Your photos of birds are amazing on Facebook.

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  3. Tabatha's avatar Tabatha says:

    I like thinking of snow as a “migration.” Here’s to peaceful moments!

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